http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/-t1.htm Forum for making posts to comment on stories written in the Character Stories section. Fri, 24 Apr 2009 05:58:58 GMT 10 http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b355/XenedraPirate/logoupdate.jpg http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/-t1.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/comments-it-s-all-over-now-baby-blue-t154.htm DarkValkyr
I like the part where Rein stopped moving. ;o]]> Story Comments Fri, 24 Apr 2009 05:58:58 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/comments-it-s-all-over-now-baby-blue-t154.htm#510 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/comments-it-s-all-over-now-baby-blue-t154.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/comments-historical-document-g-2447-the-personal-account-of-wat-the-bunnyslayer-t121.htm Sabriel Very entertaining read Rein, I saw what you did at the end there. Story Comments Tue, 07 Oct 2008 14:28:37 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/comments-historical-document-g-2447-the-personal-account-of-wat-the-bunnyslayer-t121.htm#375 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/comments-historical-document-g-2447-the-personal-account-of-wat-the-bunnyslayer-t121.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-if-a-body-t107.htm Alveen She seems real, and the dialogue between her and Reinbach is amazing. It really shows you how each of them feels without making it too obvious, very well done Bach. I think, out of everything else that has happened during the alt timeline, the person I feel sorry for the most is Molly, because she's an adorable kid who is pretty much doomed to non-existance.]]> Story Comments Sun, 14 Sep 2008 13:37:23 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-if-a-body-t107.htm#352 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-if-a-body-t107.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-duty-t106.htm Alveen I liked the new style, DV. It did seem more fliud, and I liked the repeating use of "duty," first to show his resolve and then to show how he's trying to think about what it means to him. Nicely done! Story Comments Sun, 14 Sep 2008 13:33:31 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-duty-t106.htm#350 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-duty-t106.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-the-pie-shoppe-windurst-t101.htm Verence Alv, you are crazy. That is all. Story Comments Sun, 31 Aug 2008 06:59:34 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-the-pie-shoppe-windurst-t101.htm#327 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-the-pie-shoppe-windurst-t101.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-the-feather-t80.htm DarkValkyr It was a pretty nice way to bring Reinbach back. I totally liked the ending. Story Comments Fri, 13 Jun 2008 00:51:06 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-the-feather-t80.htm#238 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/alt-the-feather-t80.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/comments-the-jester-t67.htm DarkValkyr That was such a nice read. You can totally see how much different Njarra behaves with Leh compared to let's say, me, from last night. Ifeelimportant There were few spelling errors (suspense is the only one I recall), however, less than the last one. Looking at Leh, I'd think that her thoughts are kinda similar to what SD's character is supposed to be like. It's the "OMG why so much drama /slapj00all" kind of thing. Of course, Leh's a natural comedian and more of a big sister than Njarra ... Story Comments Tue, 20 May 2008 23:32:27 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/comments-the-jester-t67.htm#197 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/comments-the-jester-t67.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/dreams-of-memories-t55.htm DarkValkyr
Sphinx, with a sister!?

Not to mention how she's soo much more innocent in her tender days.

well done this time. I could see some typo here and there, but that don't matter none, because I got it all. Really well done as always, Sphinx.]]> Story Comments Thu, 15 May 2008 13:34:54 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/dreams-of-memories-t55.htm#168 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/dreams-of-memories-t55.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/a-mind-adrift-t48.htm Ayvaen I'm amazed that you write so well when english isn't your native language It's truly awesome that you've got such a masterful command of it that you can wrote so interestingly and eloquently in English. I especially like the broadening of a character that most of us will never RP with much via this medium, kinda makes me want to give you more reasons to involve her with No'en so I can get to know her better Also I'm not planning on using this many in the future, I was just ... Story Comments Wed, 14 May 2008 10:14:14 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/a-mind-adrift-t48.htm#141 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/a-mind-adrift-t48.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/the-battle-of-korroloka-tunnel-t46.htm Sphinx Huge fan of detailed description and metaphor personally, this one really appealed to me.
Top notch^^]]> Story Comments Wed, 14 May 2008 09:51:18 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/the-battle-of-korroloka-tunnel-t46.htm#138 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/the-battle-of-korroloka-tunnel-t46.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/out-to-lunch-t39.htm Xenedra Antica o.o!? This should be interesting! beastmen on the move, duck and cover! Your Hume dude made me laugh with his total lack of interest in the Galkan escape from Altepa >.>; Story Comments Mon, 12 May 2008 21:14:52 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/out-to-lunch-t39.htm#126 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/out-to-lunch-t39.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/shattered-stone-t43.htm Xenedra Supah sweet, Vere. All these stories of beastmen on the move are getting me excited for what's to come~ I love that you used the magic shop NPC, a neat detail. So, who's up for windurst! : P Story Comments Tue, 13 May 2008 19:43:46 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/shattered-stone-t43.htm#133 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/shattered-stone-t43.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/indipendence-t30.htm DarkValkyr I found that a very interesting read. Nicely done, Sphinx. Story Comments Mon, 12 May 2008 05:40:17 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/indipendence-t30.htm#105 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/indipendence-t30.htm http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/s-s-letter-t27.htm Xenedra Super cute, Muir. A very fun read. I enjoyed her misspellings and toootal confusion toward how silly the laws seem. Story Comments Sat, 10 May 2008 19:37:12 GMT http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/s-s-letter-t27.htm#95 http://cantaperme.darkbb.com/story-comments-f8/s-s-letter-t27.htm