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Post by Alveen on Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:33 am

I liked the new style, DV. It did seem more fliud, and I liked the repeating use of "duty," first to show his resolve and then to show how he's trying to think about what it means to him. Nicely done!

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Re: Alt: ....Duty

Post by DarkValkyr on Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:34 am

Thanks. Glad to see it got the effect I wanted...though I hope more comments come in...

This whole thing was inspired by Antigone/Oedipus, so it might explain similarities.

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