The Battle of Korroloka Tunnel

Though I've enjoyed all your stories so far, I have to say this one's my favorite as of yet.
Huge fan of detailed description and metaphor personally, this one really appealed to me.
Top notch^^

Thanks, I really struggle with description honestly (. . ) That's really my biggest fault as a writer, and what kept me from going into it professionally in school.

In my case of writing, I find it difficult to incorporate metaphors and fancy stuff like you. I'm decent with descriptions, but I get bored eventually.