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Post by Sphinx on Wed May 14, 2008 5:51 am

Though I've enjoyed all your stories so far, I have to say this one's my favorite as of yet.
Huge fan of detailed description and metaphor personally, this one really appealed to me.
Top notch^^
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Post by Ayvaen on Wed May 14, 2008 6:10 am

Thanks, I really struggle with description honestly (. . ) That's really my biggest fault as a writer, and what kept me from going into it professionally in school.
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Post by DarkValkyr on Wed May 14, 2008 8:47 am

In my case of writing, I find it difficult to incorporate metaphors and fancy stuff like you. I'm decent with descriptions, but I get bored eventually.
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